A day of beauty made for me....
A breath in open air rejuvinating my entity.
An ambience so pure and chaste Scintillating heavens on earth were seen
Carnal distance, souls close
a million words our silence spoke.
Coy eyes revealing the truth
Candid were the minds of two.
In the eyes so deep,
No questions were seen.
An undaunted inclination was all
That their smile could mean.
They looked deep inside the soul,
As if it was the last glance of the adore,
In the silence their hearts spoke
Emotions were the words for both
A pious amity of this like,
Should have an end alike,
But they turned away their eyes,
With full content and delight
It wasn't the sunset but a new arise.
For their fervour had lived upto its life
awesome one :)
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ReplyDeletethank u.. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the most appropriate descriptions i have ever read or heard of any date. While reading it I just wished if I could live the date and replace the man present then.Lucky man, should say for him.
ReplyDeleteindeed .. dis date ws the perfect date.. beyond all imagination and dreams.. dis day ws a reality..
ReplyDeleteand not just the guy.. d gal too ws equally lucky.. :)
Kamaal ki hai! But samajhne me ghanta lag gaya :(
ReplyDeleteChalo kisi kaam to aayi dictionary :P
chalo dosti ka koi farz to nibhaya maine.. aapke kisi kaam to aayi meri poetry..
ReplyDeletepadhte raho.. seekhte raho.. :)
nice kirti,a masterstroke...n a masterpiece..
ReplyDeletethanks :)
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