Shattered as I walked the empty roads aimlessly,
The Stranger held my hand a bit hesitantly.
I knew not a thing but the calm of his face,
I let him walk by my side along with my pace.
No exchange of words between us was ever made,
But he understood all that was never said.
He rebuilt the faith I had long lost,
Pulled me through the tsunami of thoughts.
Days passed and I learned to smile,
And rejoiced in his Shine Divine,
Was lost in his soul magnanimous,
As he stood there with his beam so generous.
Life became an ocean of desire
Trust and Optimism spread like wild fire
He was like the angel God sent,
To hold my hand through all the existence's bends.
Ushered me through life's tenebrous maze,
Only to bring back my Halcyon Days!
A nice piece indeed.
ReplyDeleteSuch strangers come in disguise !
true.. god sent angels.. only wen u start loosing hope they come take u by ur hand and help u through the turbulent times!!
ReplyDeleteI wish everyone understands our unspoken words.
ReplyDeleteTo understand is to love.
But when life becomes an ocean of desire,It becomes painful too.
LOvely poem Kirti.
very nice....hope the stranger remains no more a stranger and helps you to wade through life with all joy and smiles...amen!!
ReplyDeletedada. thank u for the read...
ReplyDeletebut..
this was not a romantic poem..though it looks like one..and this ocean of desire is just full of my dreams and no expectations from an one else!
@abhishek sir,.. thank you for the blessings :)
ReplyDeletenice poem...iread it on quotable quotes
ReplyDeletegr8 use of words..
marvellous
thank u yash.. i feel elated wen u ppl actually take interest in these writes.. :)
ReplyDelete恐ろしい
ReplyDeletein case anybody is wondering, that means "awesome" in japanese :D
ReplyDeleteshukriya.. :)
ReplyDeleteahhh very nice concept....loved it!
ReplyDeleteoh nd a pretty nice blog...
perhaps u could check up weedope.blogspot.com
thank u shubhit.. :)
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ReplyDeletevery well written kirti.. :)
ReplyDeleteyr wat is dis?//
ReplyDeleteu cn't b so gud..
jst jokin..really u r clicking in al d aspects f poery..literary emotions n nw romance as wel
haha.. u're tricked.. thats not romance.. its just friendship..
ReplyDeletewait and watch wat comes up wen m i actually turn romantic!!!!! :P
thank u ankur :)
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